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PostSubject: Tenth Doctor-Shadows Of The Dark   Wed Apr 07, 2010 9:26 pm

I have a script series of my own on Doctor Who Online and this website shall get my scripts a week before everyone else.
Here is the pilot episode.Enjoy.


The Future Trap:
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Bullets get fired across the rocky planet of Tyrax.
The wind howls, sometimes blanking out the sound of the bullets.
Dust blows, blinding and distracting the soldiers, but it could be worse.
The war the people of Tyrax were in started millenia ago, then the war stopped.
But lying dormant was the machine.The machine that could slaughter the cosmos.
Soldier #1: FIRE!
More bullets fire.Some hiting soldiers who fall to the ground.Dead.
Soldier #2: Men, over here! 3,2,1...FIRE!
Once again, the familiar sound of gun fire echoes throughout the planet.
But nothing is firing back.Had it moved? Was it playing a game?
The two soldiers cautiously stumble over the rocks towards where the machine had come.

Soldier #1: Show yourself. Don't be a coward.
No reply.
Soldier #1: I said show yourself!
Movement comes from behind the two men and the screams of their fellow soldiers race their hearts.
Soldier #2: Is it playing with us?
Soldier #1 : Don't be an idiot, boy! This thing isn't a toy, so how can it play?!
Soldier #2 (Nervous): I meant...is it tricking us?
Soldier #1: I sometimes wonder why Myran hires you men to be part of my army.You are useless.No military sense.
Soldier #2 (Confident he is right): It could! I am honestly saying it could be tricking us!
Soldier #1 (Patting #2 on the back): And you keep thinking that, OK? I'll go and see what is down there.
Soldier #2: You be careful.
Soldier#1 walks down the steep hill towards a small cave.Soldier #1: Come down, boy! Everything is....ARGH!
The soldier's screams unnaturally.
Soldier #2: Are you OK?
Walking down the hill where his leader had went,
Soldier #2: Is anyone down there?
He gets his gun ready, even though he hates using one.Metallic Voice: EXTERMINATE! EXTERMINATE! EXTERMINATE! EXTERMINATE! EXTERMINATE!Doctor Who Theme Tune

The Future Trap-Episode X-By Chris97

The sound of the TARDIS materialising fills the misty, damp air of Tyrax.
CUT TO-TARDIS Control Room

The Doctor hums to himself the tune of Elvis Presley's 'Jail House Rock'.
Doctor: Exactly the place I wanted-Earth 2010.Nice place.Bit busy in population terms but still nice.
He grabs his long brown coat and exits the TARDIS.
Doctor (disappointed): Oh, not the place I wanted.It's too misty and wet and rocky and...quiet.Too quiet...
Suddenly, the distant shape of a humanoid running towards the Doctor makes the Doctor happy.Doctor: Hi there! I was wondering if you could tell me where I am.
Soldier: HELP! HELP!
Doctor: So I guess you're not the average tour-guide around here if you want my help.You're meant to help me.
The soldier runs next to the Doctor and it looks like he is going to run on top of him!He grabs the Doctor's hand and drags the Doctor along.Soldier: You're not safe here, Sir.My leader died by this...this machine.
Doctor (Running alongside the soldier): What kind of machine? I've fought lots of machines.
Soldier: It depends.
Doctor: What do you mean 'it depends'? Depends on what?
Soldier: There's at least 5 of them in that cave, each with different designs.
Doctor (Concerned): Did these 'machines' look about 6 feet tall, have a sucker and a device that looks like an egg-whisk and
looks like a giant pepper pot?
Soldier: You summed them up in the one sentence, Sir.How do you know?
Doctor: Well, 1-I've met them before and 2-There's one coming over that hill.
The both look up the hill to see a machine that matches the Doctor's description.
Soldier: What the hell is that, Sir?
Doctor: A Dalek.It's a Dalek.A Dalek that shouldn't exist due to it's species extinction on Earth.
The Dalek swivels it's grey dome towards the pair, as if it is listening.Dalek: DALEKS ALWAYS SURVIVE!
Doctor: You never do!
Soldier: Umm...Sorry to burst your bubble Doctor, but if they didn't survive, then why are they here?
Dalek: THE HUMANOID IS WISE.YOU CONTRADICT YOURSELF, TIMELORD.
Doctor (to soldier): I thought I was helping you.What is your name?
Soldier: Roberts, Sir. Phyllian Roberts. I'm on your side, but that thing is true.
Doctor (Rolls eyes): Which means you're siding with a Dalek, Roberts!
Dalek: CEASE TALKING! YOU WILL BOTH COME WITH ME!
Doctor: Never! *whispers to Roberts* Stand up to it.
Roberts: You'll have to kill us first!
Doctor: No! That's the wrong thing to say!
Dalek: I TAKE THE HUMANOIDS OPTION.EXTERMINATE! EXTERMINATE! EXTERMINATE! EXTERMINATE!The Doctor grabs Roberts' gun and sonics it with the Sonic Screwdriver.
Doctor: When I say fire, fire.OK?
Roberts: OK.
Dalek: EXTERMINATE!
Doctor: Fire!
Roberts' fires the gun and instead of a standard bullet, a stream of fire shoots out and burns the nearby Dalek.Dalek: REDUCE HEAT! HEAT SHIELDS WORKING AT APPROXIMATLEY 49% EFFICIENCY! THIS UNIT WILL GO INTO
SHUT DOWN FOR 120 RELS FOR RECHARGE.

Doctor: Wow! Didn't think a Dalek would surrender to a flame-thrower.
Roberts: It said '120 rels'. What does that mean?
Doctor: Rels are the Dalek equivelent to seconds.Which means we have 120 seconds to run.Actually, make that 100.
Both start to sprint for their lifes, but the Dalek unexpectantly starts to restart with a few sparks.Dalek: INFORM SUPREME COUNCIL, THE PRISONERS ARE ESCAPING! I REPEAT PRISONERS ARE ESCAPING!
WE NEED MORE UNITS!
A muffled metallic voice can be heard saying "Instantly".Dalek: I WILL SEEK, LOCATE AND ANNIHILATE THE PRISONERS!The Dalek edges closer to the edge of the rocky hill.Dalek:ELEVATE!
The Dalek rises, and it's grey-black paintwork gleams in the planets 2 suns.
The Doctor and Roberts are still running, and the Doctor finds a small cave enterance.
Doctor: In here!
The Doctor climbs in, but Roberts' military uniform, complete with bulging pockets, gets caught in the rocks and twigs.
Doctor: In,in,in!

CUT TO: UNDERGROUND BUNKER.
Screens filled with images of the planet's surface, co-ordinates and temperature fill the bunker.
A silver and blue Dalek glides along the tiled floor towards the screen.
Dalek Commander: UNIT 5055372 HAS REQUESTED BACK UP.OPEN THE TOMBS!2 large metal doors open.10 daleks exit each door.
In Door 1, 10 'Renegade' Daleks exit.
In Door 2, 10 'Bronze' Daleks exit.

20 Drone Daleks: OUR OBJECTIVE-SEEK AND DESTROY THE PRISONERS!
Dalek Commander: CORRECT.COMPLETE YOUR OBJECTIVE!
The Daleks elevate out of the bunker and set about completing their tasks.
Dalek Commander: SUPREME DALEK, WE HAVE ORDERED UNITS TO HELP SEEK OUT THE PRISONERS.
Supreme Dalek: EXCELLENT.
Dalek Commander: EXCELLENT IS CONSIDERED AN EMOTION.EMOTIONS ARE A WEAKNESS! YOU ARE
CONSIDERED...
Supreme Dalek: SILENCE! WOULD OUR CREATOR, DAVROS, AND DALEK CAAN APPROVE OF OUR EXPEDITION?
Dalek Commander: YOU ARE INSANE! OF COURSE THEY WOULD NOT!
Supreme Dalek: THEN YOU ARE UNFIT TO SERVE THE 201029 DALEK EXTERMINATION SQUAD.
Dalek Commander: I INSIST THAT YOUR UNIT IS DEACTIVATED.
Supreme Dalek: CHANGE YOUR WORDS AROUND.I INSIST THAT YOUR UNIT IS DEACTIVATED.
Dalek Commander: NEVER! I SHALL SERVE THE EXTERMINATION SQUAD UNTIL THE DAY I ...
Supreme Dalek: DALEK DRONES, CHANGE OF OBJECTIVE.KEEP THE DOCTOR AND HIS HUMANOID ALLY ALIVE.
THEY CAN HELP FIND OUT WHAT THE POWER SOURCE AT THE BOTTOM OF THIS PLANET IS.
DALEK DRONES (OVER COMM): WE OBEY!

CUT TO: Cavern Enterance.

Doctor:As if things couldn't get any worse, we are stuck in a small cave with nowhere else to go and we've got a Dalek
stalking us.
Roberts: Oh well, it gives us time to proparly introduce each other.
Doctor: Are you sure? I have lots of secrets I'd prefer not to reveal.
Roberts: Well,if you are that touchy then-
Doctor: -Shh!
Roberts: What?
Doctor: I said shh!
Roberts (whispering): Why?
Doctor: Look.
Directly ahead of where the two were hiding, a squadron of Daleks glided past.
Roberts: Oh My God! It's a full squad of them!
Doctor: SHH!!!!
5 of the Daleks glide past, travelling to the right.But they then stop.
They all swivel their heads towards them.

[b]Roberts: Oh no! Doctor, what do we do?
Doctor (Casually):
We surrender.
Roberts: We do what?!
Doctor: I said we surrender.
Dalek: WISE CHOICE, TIMELORD. COME WITH ME!Doctor: Oh, did I say surrender? I meant we surrender the Daleks.
Roberts smiles confidently, but the Daleks look blank.Dalek: EXPLAIN YOURSELF, TIMELORD.Doctor: I mean we force the Daleks into surrendering to us.Clever, eh?
Roberts: Very clever. I actually really like you, Doctor.
A Dalek glides towards Roberts and aims it's sucker at him.
Doctor: NO! Don't you dare!
Dalek: TELL US WHAT YOU KNOW, HUMANOID! WHAT ABILITIES DOES YOUR SPECIES HAVE?
Roberts: Doctor?
Doctor: Tell them.
Roberts: Well, the male of our species adapted to the radiation on the surface of the planet, including me, meaning that our
bodies became, I don't know how to put this but attractive is the only word I can think of.Our bodies became more muscular
too and that gave us an excuse for more men to enter our army.
Dalek: DALEKS HAVE NO NEED FOR MUSCLE, BUT WHEN WE GET BACK TO THE BUNKER, WE WILL OBSERVE
YOUR MUSCLE.
Roberts: No offence, but I don't want you to take my clothes off, thank you very much.
Dalek: YOU HAVE NO SAY IN THE MATTER! IT IS COMPULSARY!Roberts: What about the Doctor?
Dalek: HE WILL BE INTERRIGATED.
Roberts: Oh.

CUT TO: Underground Bunker.

Supreme Dalek: WHAT IS KEEPING YOU FROM YOUR RETURN, DALEK SQUADRON?
Dalek: WE ARE DEALING WITH THE DOCTOR AND A HUMANOID KNOWN AS ROBERTS.
Supreme Dalek: WHAT SPECIES IS ROBERTS?
Dalek: HE CLAIMS TO BE ONE OF FEW SURVIVING TYRAXANS ON THIS PLANET.
Supreme Dalek (Outraged): IMPOSSIBLE! THEY WERE ALL DESTROYED!
Dalek: ALL BUT A FEW, SUPREME DALEK.
Supreme Dalek: THEN WE NEED ALL THE INFORMATION WE CAN GET FROM HIM.BRING HIM TO ME!
Dalek: I OBEY!

CUT TO: Cavern Enterance.

Dalek: SUPREME DALEK REQUESTS YOU, ROBERTS.
Roberts: I don't want to go. I want to stay with the Doctor.
Dalek: RESISTANCE IS USELESS.YOU WILL OBEY! OBEY! OBEY! OBEY! OBEY!Doctor: OK, OK! He'll go.
Roberts: What?! Of course I'm not!
Dalek: ACTIVATE TELEPORT LINK!
Roberts' body glowed an electric blue and he vanished.
Doctor: Now, what do you need me for?
Dalek: WHAT HAPPENED TO OUR CREATOR?
Doctor (Puzzled): What do you mean?
Dalek #2: WHAT HAPPENED TO DAVROS?
Dalek #3: DID HE SURVIVE?

Doctor: I don't know! Why should I?
The Daleks look at the Doctor, like they are going to attack.
Doctor: Well, what I mean is..I tried to save him! Honestly, him and Caan.But then the Crucible blew up.
Supreme Dalek's voice: THE CRUCIBLE IN WHICH I DIED IN?
Doctor: Is-is that the Supreme Dalek?
Supreme Dalek: AFFIRMATIVE.
Doctor: Oh, I am so sorry.Really I am.I never knew.How did you survive? I saw you die.
Supreme Dalek: YES, YOU WITNESSED MY DEATH ALONG WITH YOUR PRECIOUS CHILDREN OF TIME.
TELL ME, WHICH ONE DIED?
Doctor: Why would you want to know? Anyway I-
Supreme Dalek: I NEED TO KNOW EVERYTHING ABOUT OUR FAILURE, OR YOUR ALLY DIES!
Doctor: It was Donna.The DoctorDonna.
Supreme Dalek: EXCELLENT.
Doctor: Is excellent not an emotion?
Supreme Dalek: YOU QUESTION MY SPEECH ASWELL? DALEK COMMANDER DIED BECAUSE OF HIS RESISTANCE!
Doctor: Really? That was a bit unfair on your own species!
Supreme Dalek: I DO NOT CARE ABOUT INFAIRNESS.NOW I SHALL CONCENTRATE ON YOUR ALLY!
Doctor:Whatever you do, go easy on him.
Supreme Dalek: IF YOU WISH.
Static could be heard.The 5 daleks stared at the Doctor.
Doctor: What?!
Daleks: COME WITH US!
Doctor: Of course.

CUT TO: Underground Chamber

Supreme Dalek: SO, WHAT IS YOUR SPECIES LIKE?
Roberts: I'm not telling.
Supreme Dalek: DO NOT TRY TO RESIST!
Roberts: You can shout at me all you want, I'm not telling.
The Supreme Dalek gave Roberts a violent look.
Roberts: You see, I know what you're thinking.
Supreme Dalek:EXPLAIN YOURSELF!Roberts: I'm kinda phsycic.
Supreme Dalek: AN ABILITY A DALEK COULD BENIFIT FROM?
Roberts: No, actually.It's high level phsycic and telepathy, so it could drive you insane.
Supreme Dalek: AND YOU ARE NOT INSANE?
Roberts: Because I adapted to it.It would make your insane little mutant alot more insane.
Supreme Dalek: YOU WILL REGRET THIS!
Roberts: Why? What you gonna do?
Supreme Dalek: BLOW UP YOUR ENTIRE PLANET!
Roberts: Really? How's that possible?
Supreme Dalek: BY IGNITING THE POWER SOURCE AT THE CORE OF THIS PLANET.
Roberts: Then I'll need to stop you-even without the Doctor.
Supreme Dalek: THEN YOU'LL BE EXTERMINATED!
Roberts: It's a risk I'll need to take.

CUT TO-Cavern Enterance.
Dalek: SUPREME DALEK HAS PLANS FOR YOU DOCTOR, BUT THEY'LL HAVE TO WAIT.
Doctor: Why?
Dalek #2: IT APPEARS YOUR HUMANOID ALLY IS CAUSING TROUBLE FOR THE DALEK SUPREME!
Doctor: Ha! Good Roberts!
Dalek: DO NOT BE AMUSED BY OUR DOWNFALL!
Doctor: Oh, so you admit being defeated?
Dalek #2: NOT NECESSERALY, HE IS DISTRUPTING THE OPERATION.
Doctor: What operation?
Dalek: THE OPERATION TO RID THIS PLANET FROM THE 8TH SOLAR SYSTEM!
Doctor: And he's trying to stop it? Communicate with the Supreme Dalek.

CUT TO-Underground Bunker.

Supreme Dalek: YOU WILL FAIL, HUMANOID.
Roberts: I don't care.I've got a mental link with the Doctor, so if I die, he'll know where to find me.
Supreme Dalek: CLEVER, BUT NOT CLEVER ENOUGH.ACTIVATE THE DESTRUCTION BOMB!
A small computer screen turned on and it read "O2:10" which then ticked down to "02:09".
Roberts:You really shouldn't have done that.
Supreme Dalek: DALEK SQUADRON, THE PLAN IS SET.THIS WILL SEND A WAVE TO THE FUTURE OF THE GALAXY
,DESTROYING HUMANITY, MARTIANITY, AND EVERY OTHER SPECIES!
Roberts: Then this becomes the ultimate sacrifice.
He presses his fingers to his temple and thinks "Bye, Doctor.Thank you".
Roberts pushed the button and the bunker started to shake.

Supreme Dalek: IN THE END, YOU FAIL.
Roberts: And so did you.Bye then.
Roberts saluted and that was then the room blew up...
CUT TO-Cavern.
The ground shook, which knocked the Doctor off his feet.
Doctor: Roberts!
Dalek: THE EXPLOSION HAS BEEN HELD IN THE BUNKER, BUT THE GALAXY WIDE EXPLOSION WILL NOT HAPPEN.
SELF DESTRUCT.I REPEAT, ALL UNITS SELF DESTRUCT.
One by one, the Daleks exploded.
The Doctor ran over the rocks, up and down the hills until he got to where the opening to the bunker should be.
But in it's place was a pile of rubble.
The Doctor picked up a pebble.

Doctor: 21, too young to die.Far too young.
The Doctor walked up to the TARDIS and opened the door.
Doctor: And keeping other species alive is why I keep travelling.
The Door shuts and a large shadow engulfs the side of the TARDIS, then it vanishes with a deep laugh.
Doctor Who Theme Tune

Trailer for the series:

Doctor: When you're scared...
Sutekh's glowing green eyes light up a shadowy room
Doctor: ...and there's no where else to go...
Haemovores rise out from the Thames.
Doctor: Then there's only one thing to do...
Alex: Run!
Shadows glide across the corridor.
Dalek,Cyberman and Sutekh all in unison:And the fearless timelord shall perish!
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PostSubject: Re: Tenth Doctor-Shadows Of The Dark   Wed Apr 07, 2010 9:33 pm

Glad to see someone kicking of the Fanfic section. Love your work Chris

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PostSubject: Re: Tenth Doctor-Shadows Of The Dark   Fri May 07, 2010 6:44 pm

Thanks Luke :D
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